金风日丽阅楼台，满垄黄花次第开。

饮露悠然添粉脸，凌秋独悟落红腮。

蜂狂不问疏篱瘦，蝶醉空遗玉叶哀。

四友岁寒终未尽，墙题数影笑颜来。

Golden wind day Li read the terrace, full of ridges and yellow flowers bloom again and again.

Drink dew leisurely and add powder to your face, and Ling Qiu alone realizes that her cheeks are red.

Bees are crazy and don't ask about thin hedges. Butterflies are drunk and leave jade leaves sad.

The four friends are not finished in the end of the cold year. The questions on the wall are a few shadows and smiles.

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用数个意象勾勒多姿多彩的秋天景象，通过拟人手法表现出几分自在与洒脱，整首诗表达更多的是平凡日子里的淡淡欢喜。词汇量丰富，稍显生僻，颇费思量。

The colorful autumn scene is outlined with several images, and the anthropomorphic technique shows a bit of freedom and freedom, more of a touch of joy in ordinary days. The vocabulary is rich, slightly rare and thoughtful.