3月20日，李少红执导，刘涛、周渝民主演的《大宋宫词》开播。

On March 20, the Song Dynasty palace Ci, directed by Li Shaohong and starred by Liu Tao and Zhou Yumin, began broadcasting.

电视剧播出后迎来不少吐槽的声音，截止到发稿，豆瓣从开分的6.1滑落至4.9分，可谓是断崖式下跌，有29.7%的观众打出一星，给出四星和五星好评的观众还不到24%。而看完目前上线的几集，会发现电视剧口碑差并不冤枉，至少有以下几个明显问题。

After the broadcast, many voices of Tucao were heard. By the end of the press release, the 6.1 of the bean rose from the opening score to 4.9 points, which was a fall of cliff style. 29.7% of the audience had a star, and the audience who make complaints about four stars and five stars was less than 24%. And after watching the current online episodes, you will find that the poor reputation of TV series is not unjust, at least there are the following obvious problems.

问题1：节奏太慢、叙事凌乱

Problem 1: the rhythm is too slow and the narrative is messy

《大宋宫词》一口气上线8集，其中前两集没大的矛盾冲突，讲的基本都是赵光义和太子之间的家长里短，节奏非常拖沓，加上前两集可以免费观看，而从第三集开始就要求会员，所以肯定会有一部分观众看完前两集就准备弃剧，对故事和节奏的不满，让他们直接去豆瓣打了差评。

The first two episodes of "Song Dynasty palace Ci" have no big conflicts. They are all about Zhao Guangyi's family relationship with the crown prince, and the rhythm is very slow. In addition, the first two episodes can be watched for free, and members are required from the third episode. Therefore, some viewers will be ready to abandon the drama after watching the first two episodes, dissatisfied with the story and rhythm, and let them go directly Douban made a bad comment.

除了节奏不好外，电视剧的剪辑也很成问题，整个故事顺序颠三倒四，刘涛饰演的刘娥的人物背景是在不断回忆中完成的，出场时让人摸不到头脑。

In addition to the bad rhythm, the editing of TV series is also a problem. The whole story sequence is upside down. The background of Liu e, played by Liu Tao, is completed in constant memories, which makes people feel confused when they appear.

其他角色的背景介绍也几乎没有，相对有观众熟知的清宫戏，宋朝的电视剧相对较少，编剧和导演过于高估观众的理解力了。比如赵光义在废墟里出去要立德昭为太子，但前面根本就没有说过德昭是谁，怎么指望观众都能知道德昭是赵匡胤次子？难道要大家都拿着历史书追剧吗？

There are few background introductions for other characters. Compared with the Qing palace drama, which is well known to the audience, there are relatively few TV dramas in the Song Dynasty. The writers and directors overestimate the audience's understanding. For example, Zhao Guangyi went out in the ruins to make Dezhao the prince, but he didn't say who Dezhao was. How can we expect the audience to know that Dezhao is the second son of Zhao Kuangyin? Do you want everyone to pursue drama with history books?

其他不必要的戏份一拖再拖，有些重要的细节又没有充分展现，《大宋宫词》的剪辑确实应该挨板子。

Other unnecessary parts of the play are delayed again and again, and some important details are not fully displayed. The editing of "palace Ci of the great Song Dynasty" should be punished.

问题2：刘涛演十几岁少女太违和

Question 2: Liu Tao's acting as a teenager is too disobedient

作为男女主角，周渝民和刘涛的人设都很违和，演技也差强人意。参考历史，刚出场的刘涛是十几岁的小姑娘，但刘涛今年已经43岁了啊！就算再精致的妆容、再用心的磨皮，也掩盖不了岁月留下的痕迹，更何况从气质和言行举止上，刘涛根本无法呈现出角色应有的少女感。

As the leading actor and heroine, Zhou Yumin and Liu Tao's personality is very inconsistent, and their acting skills are also unsatisfactory. Referring to history, Liu Tao is a teenager, but he is 43 years old now! No matter how delicate the make-up is, no matter how hard the skin is polished, it can not cover up the traces left by the years. Moreover, from the aspects of temperament and behavior, Liu Tao can not present the girlish feeling that the character should have.

周渝民也有同样的问题，并且很可能因为是古装戏，所以两个人的表演都相对拘谨，没有任何能让观众印象深刻的段落。

Zhou Yumin also has the same problem, and probably because it is an ancient costume play, their performances are relatively restrained, and there is no paragraph that can impress the audience.

除了演技之外，人设也有很大问题，周渝民饰演的三皇子，生性懦弱、没有担当、没有大局观，这样的儿子，赵光义喜欢他的理由是什么？

In addition to acting skills, there is also a big problem with personality. The third prince played by Zhou Yumin is cowardly, has no responsibility, and has no overall view. What's Zhao Guangyi's reason for liking such a son?

刘娥的人设过于玛丽苏了，进了王宫，竟然说出“不要荣华富贵只要相濡以沫”这样的对白，让人觉得特别违和。

Liu e's personality is too much for marisu. When she enters the palace, she even says the dialogue "don't be rich and rich, just help each other". It makes people feel particularly disobedient.

问题3：情节胡编狗血，台词过于雷人

Question 3: the plot is a mess and the lines are too shocking

剧中很多剧情和台词都特别雷人，让人觉得这根本和历史正剧毫不沾边，反而是让人发笑的胡闹。

Many of the plots and lines in the play are particularly shocking, which makes people feel that this is not related to the historical drama at all, but a ridiculous farce.

比如三皇子奇迹生还，带刘娥回家。明知道齐溪饰演的郭清漪是正房妻子，并且又有家室有背景，不管是出于礼节，还是个人情商，三皇子都应该先带刘娥和正房妻子见面才对，但他就这样任性的直接带进自己的房里，表现两个人相爱，也不应该用这种让人无法认同的方式吧？

For example, the third prince miraculously survived and took Liu e home. Mingming knows that Guo Qingyi, played by Qi Xi, is the wife of the main room, and has a family background. No matter it's out of courtesy or personal EQ, the third prince should first take Liu e to meet his wife. But he willfully brings them directly into his room to show their love. Shouldn't he use this way that people can't identify with him?

刘娥假死之后，苏义简很急切的想将她送出城，远离这个是非之地，但刘娥见到杀死小皇孙的女刺客，一直跟到秦府，期间并没有告知苏义简缘由，被秦府的家丁看到之后，他其实有各种托词可以带刘娥走，怎么就心有灵犀的说是要把刘娥送到秦府当丫鬟？编剧太想当然了。

After Liu e pretended to be dead, Su Yijian was eager to send her out of the city and away from the land of right and wrong. However, Liu e saw the female assassin who killed her little grandson and followed her to the Qin house. During that time, she did not tell Su Yijian why. After being seen by the family members of the Qin house, he actually had various excuses to take Liu e away. How could she say that she wanted to send Liu e to the Qin house as a servant girl? The writers take it for granted.

王妃生下皇孙后，带给皇帝赵光义看，这就开始了一系列的迷之操作。

After the Royal concubine gave birth to the emperor's grandson, she brought it to the emperor Zhao Guangyi, which started a series of mysterious operations.

首先是赵光义说要抱抱小皇孙，刚出生的婴儿都会哭，他却和小婴儿置气，说你要哭还来这干什么啊？这是一个老人应该说出来的话？

First of all, Zhao Guangyi said that he wanted to hold his little grandson. The newborn babies would cry, but he was angry with the baby and said that if you want to cry, why do you come here? Is that what an old man should say?

接着台词更雷人，赵光义竟然说皇孙一直哭是不祥之兆，哪个皇帝会这么说自己的孙子啊！

Then the lines are even more shocking. Zhao Guangyi even said that it's a bad omen for the emperor to cry all the time. Which emperor would say that about his grandson!

后面就接着决定了骚操作，非要做庆典祈福，要让大家都摸一下小皇孙的头，并且现场又不好好做安保，这样的剧情安排太儿戏了吧！

Then decided to Sao operation, must do celebration blessing, let everyone touch the head of the little grandson, and the scene is not good security, such plot arrangement is too playful!

明明王妃很讨厌刘娥，几乎将她视作眼中钉，但自己中箭后，怎么会毫不犹豫的就将自己的儿子托付给她？

Princess Mingming hated Liu E and almost regarded her as an eyesore. But after she was shot, how could she entrust her son to her without hesitation?

小皇孙被杀之后，赵光义要将刘娥赐死，这时三皇子饰演的周渝民开始求情，台词竟然是“郭妃还有家人，刘娥只有我！”颇有台湾偶像剧既视感，哪是一个太子能说出来的话啊！

After the little grandson was killed, Zhao Guangyi wanted to kill Liu E. at this time, Zhou Yumin, played by the third prince, began to plead for mercy. The line was "Guo Fei and her family, Liu e only has me!" There is a sense of Taiwan idol drama. What a prince can say!

不过最雷人的还是这一句，赵光义另外两个儿子穿着官服聊天，其中一个说：“父皇自幼喜欢三弟。”这种明显错误的台词，编剧到底是怎么想出来的，这不是在侮辱观众智商吗？

However, the most striking is this sentence. Zhao Guangyi's other two sons chatted in official clothes, and one of them said: "my father and Emperor liked his third brother since he was a child." How did the screenwriter come up with such obviously wrong lines? Isn't it insulting the audience's intelligence?

这七处雷人的情节和台词，确实让人对这部剧缺少信心，也没有继续追剧的欲望，评分低毫不冤枉，编剧和导演真应该好好反省一下。

The seven shocking plots and lines really make people lack confidence in the play and the desire to pursue it. It's not wrong that the score is low. The screenwriter and director should really reflect on it.